They sat at the edge of the roof and watched the cops control the crowd which went berserk seeing their lifeless bodies lying soaked in blood.
For them, it was Love.
For society, it was a Sin.
They smiled because now they were together in a world where love was not considered as a sin.
For them, it was Love.
For society, it was a Sin.
They smiled because now they were together in a world where love was not considered as a sin.
imaginative and well written :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!! :)
DeleteI like it when someone narrates a complete story in just few words...Nice one!:)
ReplyDeleteIts my first attempt, thanks for appreciating Tarang :)
DeleteSociety.....such a crazy breed indeed!!!
ReplyDeleteYes it is!
DeleteVery well written, Few words brought lot of attention to that drowned dead bodies.
ReplyDeleteYou should write a short story with some more sentences.
Thanks for your review to fortunes. I have tried a humorous story, if you have time check it out link
thank you Nachi :)
DeleteActually i tried writing a 55 fiction story, that's why there are less sentences.. but next time i will try to write more sentences :)